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Final Film: The Chase
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Hello, this is me and my team's finished and completed film. For this film we wanted to capture all aspects of horror and thriller to let the audience know instantly the genre we chose and were trying to portray.We began by having Carmen, the primary character, be perplexed and look around because she has a hunch that someone is nearby and because she is afraid because Melanie left to get gloves while Carmen is by herself. The assassin watched for her and chased her into the classroom in an effort to carry out his murderous plot. Breathless and terrified, Carmen makes a quick getaway to the classroom with her companion Melanie, telling her about the murderer. Unaware of the circumstances and doubting Carmen's story, Melanie attempts to track down the alleged "killer" on her own. Unfortunately, Melanie does not make it out alive after seeing the murderer. The killer enters the classroom door heads towards the closet and begins to twist the door knob and bang on the do...
Peer Feedback
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A group of my peers in school sat down and viewed the draft of our opening film. We played the film on our group members' laptop, Melanie A. The first thing they recommended was to take out the "The End" lettering since the film is an "opening." The next tip was to take out the part where the killer opens the door since the killer is smiling and to make the plot seem like the main killer stays alive instead of getting killed. To replace the killer opening the door they suggested that we add a scene of the protagonist being in the closet and holding scissors and saying, " if you come in here i will kill you." Another add in was to put the title all the way towards the end of the opening. The final suggestions were to put darker lighting throughout the film and to add more inticing music with all the scenes.
First Draft: The Chase
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Hello this is our first draft of our opening film, in this film we wanted to portray the genre of horror by adding fear infused sounds, a tall scary antagonist, and two innocent protagonists being chased. We started by having the main protagonist Carmen be confused and look around since she has an instinct that someone is around, she is scared since Melanie went to get gloves and she is alone. The killer waiting and sighting for her chase her to the class room hoping to execute his plan of killing her. Carmen makes a quick escape to the classroom with her friend Melanie, breathless and scared she tells her about the killer. Melanie oblivious to the situation and in disbelief questions if Carmen is telling the truth, so he tries to find the said “killer” herself. Melanie unfortunately sights the killer but luckily makes an escape. Unluckily for Carmen the killer makes his way into the classroom and opens the classroom door that she is in. This opening leads the viewers with ...