Peer Feedback

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A group of my peers in school sat down and viewed the draft of our opening film. We played the film on our group members' laptop, Melanie A. The first thing they recommended was to take out the "The End" lettering since the film is an "opening." The next tip was to take out the part where the killer opens the door since the killer is smiling and to make the plot seem like the main killer stays alive instead of getting killed. To replace the killer opening the door they suggested that we add  a scene of the protagonist being in the closet and holding scissors and saying, " if you come in here i will kill you." Another add in was to put the title all the way towards the end of the opening. The final suggestions were to put darker lighting throughout the film and to add more inticing music with all the scenes.

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